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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Were you to walk on blazing coals , not far behind am I Helped to achieve our common goals here where the answer lies Each word in orchestration whether "doo-wop" or "Doo-dah " Re-sounds in syncopation like some funky kind of "Ska" Each word a diff'rent instrument , that works together well You designate the songs content , I'll chime in like a bell Once in a while dis-chord may strike as I am still an oaf Un-easily before the mike I make mistakes like so Lest you may think me quite tone deaf , for me to keep this real Explain I must , that rhyme bereft , 'twas amplifier squeal And having twisted things around once more it's time to go Duets have a peculiar sound , when sung by one , you know |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lead on Doc, I shall follow, even iffen I don't git to sit next ta ya. Cool pome. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ No fair ! Here you are all finished with your homework and roll hasn't even been called yet ! Great show ! First one done has to clean the erasers ! NaNaNaNa-Na-Na ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Kethry, Thanks , but who said you couldn't sit next to me ? There's still room on the other side . Doc Marge, Oh alright ! But I'm warning you if all that dust gets me to sneezin' you better wear a raincoat or sit way in back ! Doc |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh...oh... this is great Doc and I haven't even started yet... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Doc's just a one man band... and pretty good at it too... I have a feeling he's going for extra credit though...  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
BTW... I hope everyone noticed that this is not only a DOUBLE ACROSTIC - It's also written in perfect iambic heptameter... (da-DUM) with seven metric feet per line.. |
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