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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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Within our grasp such seldom pass, Yet oft forborne without concern. Reach forth - Enhand the Ring of Brass. Solicitude invites surpass; Too soon a lesson we must learn. Within our grasp such seldom pass. Beyond our reach in swift bypass, Life's carousel in constant turn. Reach forth - Enhand the Ring of Brass. Encore at best a chance repass No surety of bout's return Within our grasp such seldom pass. Best not forego or overpass; Ne'er hesitate, remand or spurn. Reach forth - Enhand the Ring of Brass. Lest we partake life's looking glass, An opt for naught yields morrow's yearn; Within our grasp such seldom pass, Reach forth - Enhand the Ring of Brass. |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh what a beautiful villanel I read it three times just to absorb it all.Wonderful read Suzanne |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I guess this is why you're the teacher! Wonderful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
yeppers Nan, you the teacher I the fool that is why I've come to skool. Nice writ you done did Keth. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my! It shows once more why you are the teacher and I am the student. What can I say Nan, except great writing! What will be next Nan? Pantoum?  |
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