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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Bathing In Moonlight Full moon, your magic light shines down on me Your silver spell's a cherished memory Illuminating beams; sweet mystery You bring my spirit utter ecstasy Delightful light of perfect harmony Full moon, your magic light shines down on me You calm my storms till I feel heavenly Your touch is like a lover's hand on me Illuminating beams; sweet mystery Seductive flirt with my reality You chain my heart; bequeathing liberty Full moon, your magic light shines down on me Alluring dreams into conspiracy Of moon lit images illusory Illuminating beams; sweet mystery A silver frail note flutters playfully Enchanting melody; night's symphony Full moon, your magic light shines down on me Illuminating beams; sweet mystery Munda |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Munda, that was clever to rhyme the b line with the a's well done. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As soft through filtered clouds I see this writing of your poetry that flows as rivers yet may be for I an act of lunacy . Doc |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Munda, you did such a great job with this one! My favorite line; "Your silver spell's a cherished memory" I really enjoyed your poem, it's beautiful! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Kethry - I thought I'd do it the easy way, but it turned out to be a lot harder instead.  Thanks you  Doc. Moose - You honour the Dutchie. Thank you  Debbie - Thanks !  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL... You're absolutely right.. Keeping a uniform rhyme scheme such as this is indeed more difficult... *sardonic grin*... You've done a great job on this Munda. I expect that few people here realize that you write this well in your "second language". That's even more of a challenge. Your iambic pentameter, your rhyme scheme, and your theme are all flawless... Great job, my friend..  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm happy... I'm happy! Thank you Nan.  |
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