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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Noah's Nark Noah knew knowledge nobody knows Waters would willfully wash worldly woes For fortunate family, future flooding foretold Brothers built bulky boat bearing beasties bifold An able apprentice appointed an ark Enticing entire enrollment’s embark Collecting cute creatures catagorically classed An admirable animal abundance amassed Prolific pure pairs plodded pliable plank Diving deep down deliverance’s den dark and dank Assuming adventure and ample amuse Creatures cooly condoned classy Carnival Cruise Dual dappled dalmations delightfully danced Proud peacocky partners presumptuously pranced Paired playful panthers pleasantly pounced Fine feathered pheasants flutterly flounced Elegant elephants’ entered enthused Both baboon babies brought bashful bemuse Rambunctious rabbits readily refused Quivering cowards quite quickly confused Holding heaven’s hewn helm hautily high Noah now navigated new nations nearby Floundering forward forewarning frustration At animals anxiety and anticipation Noah nervously neared nebulous knowhow But bungling bird bravely brought beauteous bough Scurrilous seas suddenly slowly succumbed Setting slithering ship striking slippery scum Arduously alighting atop Ararat Allowing all animals anxious attack Entire entourages ecstatically escaped Dapperly darting down deep drifting drape Avowing avenge at an asinine act Coercing caged creatures close constant contact Triumphantly twosomes tromped tritely together Flocking from forefather’s feather forever Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
I love it, even if you have flipped your lid or If one is permitted an insidious quip Liz' critical lid did a hideous flip. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Ted I am quite amused by your critical views But please pen retorts with alliterate muse And please do not tempt my alliterate wit I'm equipped to flip quite gripping quick quipping quips Narkily yours Liz |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
We're all-literate here. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ted, Love your sense of humor, and your sonnet on writing sonnets is great. i keep going back to read it. I'm waiting to see what you do with alliteration. Hope you have time for the assignment. Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh.... There's always one who has to get their homework done early... This is AWESOME, my friend.... hehe... of course..  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my....oh my....oh my....lost for words here.... |
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