|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-01-26Posts 3
I am worried ok
I took a new drug today
For what was in it I cannot say
All I know is that its bad
All I wanted was to be happy
But now I feel real sad
Soon they will take me away
15 days I will stay
Why I do not know
For all I wanted to be is happy
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since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
Don't let your life end with drugs. Make whatever you took the that time the last one.
Your life is too precious to waste in such away.
PS: Drugs won't make you happy, only you and those you love can.
since 1999-12-04Posts 549
dk138: i have mixed feelings about this poem... i like the idea, but the rhymes are very trite and simple... also, i simply dont get the 15 days thing... what is happening to this person? the jail sentence for drug use is over a year... so what's the deal?
jerome the boy with no brain
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
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