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dk138 New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 3 |
Worried I am worried ok I took a new drug today For what was in it I cannot say All I know is that its bad All I wanted was to be happy But now I feel real sad Soon they will take me away 15 days I will stay Why I do not know For all I wanted to be is happy |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Don't let your life end with drugs. Make whatever you took the that time the last one. Your life is too precious to waste in such away. PS: Drugs won't make you happy, only you and those you love can. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
dk138: i have mixed feelings about this poem... i like the idea, but the rhymes are very trite and simple... also, i simply dont get the 15 days thing... what is happening to this person? the jail sentence for drug use is over a year... so what's the deal? sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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