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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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She's haunted by your face The memory of your touch Your words she can't erase Your love, your hope, your lies She laughs when we can hear But her smile is of stone She's chased by unseen fear And at night we hear her cries The girl she was is gone You took with you her soul You may think you have won But you've only lit a fire No matter where you are You'll always feel her pain Which like a raging war Howls outside your desire |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
WOW. Strong poem. I hope that you manage to find the girl that was before too long. Guys are jerks, aren't they? Keep  |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
lyric: eerily enchanting... very good work ;o) the form and rhyme is well-done also... i commend you.. sincerely, jerome the boy with numb hands A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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