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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Sex To have sex Or to not have sex That should be the question The question that’s answer Could mean living Or dying Dying of that terrible disease That terrible disease know as AIDS AIDS? “What about it” you ask “I can’t get AIDS,” you say “Besides, I wont get AIDS if I only have sex once with a person” you ask Oh, foolish person. Don’t have sex Except with the one you love The one you want to be with forever “Forever?” you say “Why not just a day” Well, a day isn’t forever I say Oh, but you just have to say “But it’s just one day” “One day that I get some play” But think! Put that brain of yours to work! Why do you think it was put there? So you can be a jerk? Do you think you are doing the right thing? By spending a day acting like you care When you only want a little play? Why must you put everything at risk? Would you take that risk? Just to get that frisk? Or would you just get that kiss That kiss from that lovely girl But think! What would happen if you didn’t venture that way? Would the relationship take a big sway? A big sway for the better And remember, you just met her You just met her that night That night that was such a delight Because you met this beautiful girl This beautiful girl you hardly know For you only see from head to toe You haven’t looked on the inside To see the wonderful girl she is For all she is to you Is another doll to play with? “And who knows” you think “If I am lucky, I could get two” Two!? Damnit boy Think not with that! But with your brain That’s why it is there Do you really want to do this? Risk getting infected with that disease Why the hell must I do this for you? I am only the still small voice that will be with you FOREVER! You must make the decision To ask for some play Or just call it a day Oh, what a great choice I knew you cared Even if you didn’t get some play You know what you did probably made her day She didn’t have to take off anything She is probably happy enough to sing And you know- You two are still friends Perhaps more Maybe less But friendship is far better than sex And you know it. [This message has been edited by Ender (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very thought provoking and,like all the rest of your poetry, brilliant. You have a real talent and I hope it gives you lots of pleasure now and forever.  |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I didnt think guys could admit they often think not using their brains. that poem was very good. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This is a very good piece and you have some good thoughts here. I would like you to clean up a couple of words though. Otherwise it is a good piece. |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Defintely a good poem here with a good message. Us guys do need to wait and think with our heads. In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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