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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
what happened that night was not me... what we did was a first for me, and i think for you too... the first time i ever let go the first time i ever went with the flow. in your case a first to say... you got a girl untouched by no one till you... like if i was a trophy or prize to be won. you bragged to your friends like it was something for fun what we did was special how could you not know? know that i trusted you know that i care... here are some things you just dont know... i am sweet and very kind i let you in and you blew my mind i knew one night thats all it would be but i hoped maybe me and you could possibly build what we did into something more more than what it seemed to be. now its just one memory one that i would never see beacuse you just wanted to use me. its ok and its alright i expected nothing form you and got nothing in return except disappointment. you just didnt realize what you had that one night you didnt realize how special it was you took me for granted and now you must go all because of what you just dont know. |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Hey. I like thisone a lot. Don't worry. It happens to almost all girls at some time. Boys can be evil. But then again, so can girls. But boys are meaner. Yeah. It happens to the best of us. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
i agree with abra...us girls can be pretty mean sometimes too...but the guys know where to drive the hurt, and poke fun at us. Truly guys are meaner  [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 01-27-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
i must admit...it made me cry  , abra and my sis are right we can hurt just as much as a guy can but the guy really drive it home.Barbara |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is such a great poem and it discribes how that muct have felt like. I personally can not relate, but your poem was really amazing. Keep up the great work and don't let him get you down Salooma |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Don't you girls get it by now? expecting devotion from a teenage guy is like expecting orange juice from a cow? They don't have it in them! Good poem by the way. Don't let him get you down. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem, any guy who would take advantage of the one he is with should be kicked in the teeth IMHO OH, and LyricFetish, You arent looking hard enough [This message has been edited by Mistikman (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Great Poem. Don't let him depress you, he's obviously not worth it. All guys are jerks. Keep writing and |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Bahh, not you too ESP? everyone on this thread seems to be jumping on the "guys are evil scum" bandwagon. As soon as you start labeling "all" guys as scum, then you immediately include me, and I find that rather insulting. I have never done anything to intentionally hurt someone of the opposite sex (other than probably my sister, but thats another discussion altogether) If you think all guys are scum, then you arent looking hard enough for those of us who are not. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Penelope Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
Poor guys- they're not all that bad. It's like judging the world by what you see on the news... you only hear about the bad stuff. Ya know? -- I do like your poem. I hope that you don't judge all men by this one bad experience- and that you can find someone who will give you what you need. -Penny My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn. |
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