|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-01-24Posts 67
Your love enables me to be
Through my eyes you're all I can see
I look in your eyes to see the depths of your soul
And realize it's you that makes me whole
I never listen to what others say
I know they just envy me for feeling this way
Never have I known love so true
Feelings brought upon me by only you
You occupy my thoughts all through the day
Your name comes out in all that I say
You occupy all my dreams at night
Loving you makes my wrongs feel so right.
Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.
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since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
What a beautiful poem. So simple and yet so deep. I think it's great.
since 2000-01-26Posts 31
i agree with esp...it reminds me of my first love...my world was him and everything else was too....no matter what was wrong he made it feel right...it brings back alot of memories for me...
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