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Teen Poetry #2

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Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-27 11:16 PM

Your love enables me to be
Through my eyes you're all I can see

I look in your eyes to see the depths of your soul
And realize it's you that makes me whole

I never listen to what others say
I know they just envy me for feeling this way

Never have I known love so true
Feelings brought upon me by only you

You occupy my thoughts all through the day
Your name comes out in all that I say

You occupy all my dreams at night
Loving you makes my wrongs feel so right.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-01-28 04:57 AM

What a beautiful poem. So simple and yet so deep. I think it's great.

S3NSATION18
Junior Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 31

2 posted 2000-01-28 08:47 AM

i agree with esp...it reminds me of my first love...my world was him and everything else was too....no matter what was wrong he made it feel right...it brings back alot of memories for me...

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