Teen Poetry #2 |
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Tomorrow |
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abra-cadabra Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75Florissant, Missouri, USA |
Why do we go away? More and more die everyday A new friend is born when an old friend dies An old mother weeps while a new mother cries Emotions of love plus hurt equal fear And we lose someone we hold so dear Yesterday, today, and tomorrow bring pain As more of our loved ones leave on a train To some place we don't know of Maybe it's some place up above And maybe something will come to take the place But we've already been lost in space Their reasons for leaving remain unknown While sorrow and pain are the only things shown Why do we hurt? Why do we hate? With everyday, we come closer to fate How long do we have to repent When we've caused others sorrow? We'll never know, there may be no tomorrow |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
ouch..another great poem abra...truly amazing! ![]() "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
this was...wow...i just...i can't even begin...i mean...wow...i'm just...stunned...i don't believe it...i can't even...i guess this only thing i can say is...WOW!!!!!!!!!! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This Poem made me seriously THINK. It's just like so....true. Fate is something else. I really like it ![]() |
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