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since 1999-06-21
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Florissant, Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-01-26 01:58 AM

Why do we go away?
More and more die everyday
A new friend is born when an old friend dies
An old mother weeps while a new mother cries
Emotions of love plus hurt equal fear
And we lose someone we hold so dear Yesterday, today, and tomorrow bring pain
As more of our loved ones leave on a train
To some place we don't know of
Maybe it's some place up above
And maybe something will come to take the place
But we've already been lost in space
Their reasons for leaving remain unknown
While sorrow and pain are the only things shown
Why do we hurt? Why do we hate?
With everyday, we come closer to fate
How long do we have to repent
When we've caused others sorrow?
We'll never know, there may be no tomorrow

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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-27 10:45 AM

ouch..another great poem abra...truly amazing!  

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
2 posted 2000-01-27 10:53 AM

this just...i can't even begin...i'm just...stunned...i don't believe it...i can't even...i guess this only thing i can say is...WOW!!!!!!!!!!
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-01-28 03:24 AM

This Poem made me seriously THINK. It's just
like so....true. Fate is something else.
I really like it

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