Teen Poetry #2 |
dreams |
Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
There are dreams that sail off to sea And those which stay at home Dreams in need of company And those which stand alone Dreams that stay inside all night And never see the light, But if dreams can come true I swear tonight I'll dream of you. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love it. I truly love it. It took my heart by surprise and made me think of one I love. Thank You for writing such a lovely poem:It has given me a moment of pure pleasure. |
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Duchessofhearts Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 13 |
Love this poem. Wish it was true. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
smore: simply exquisite! i absolutely adore this poem... the way you personify dreams and then the sneaky tie-in at the end... simply beautiful... with utmost respect, jerome the boy that wants more kool-aid A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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