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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-01-30 02:06 AM


Cold and Alone

I sit alone in a familar place
It's not too cold, though i brought you just in case
The river sits there cold and still
I'm not sure why i'm sitting here but i soon will
I pull out a picture, the one i have of you
I stare at it intently wondering again of the past
What might have been comes to mind again
These thoughts again dawn my mind like before
I freeze on the surface but the inside i'm not sure
Your face so delicate and soft
Still I grasp the piture alone, now in the dark
It's now so cold in the dark, where are you?
I need you and your no where to be found
I put my head in my hands, the cold goes so deep
I'm lost in thought, even to lost to weep
I stare at the dark image that was in my hands
I wonder of past and present yet still uknown
Why do i sit here so cold and alone?
---Written by:Hoppy





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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-30 09:53 AM


Nice poem. Very sad though, I hope you come out on top.
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