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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-01-25 10:31 AM


When I was a lad of ten,
I worked all day and saved,
The dollar that I earned,
For a rainy day.

I kept it 'neath my pillow,
And this is God's honest truth,
Woke up the following morning,
My dollar became a tooth!

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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-25 12:07 PM


witty and funny! I loved it! Made my day a little brighter!  
Duchessofhearts
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 13

2 posted 2000-01-25 06:53 PM


very cute.
now i can truly study  

Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
3 posted 2000-01-25 07:45 PM


Very cute!!! i will continue to read all your poems for I enjoy them very much!

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-01-25 09:30 PM


Nice to see ya visit us, Toe!  And with a hillarious piece at that!  I'll echo the others, this is very cute!  I enjoyed it!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-01-25 09:36 PM


Well hello and welcome to the teen forum you disreputable piece of cloth you...
I take it you are going through your second childhood posting in this form..lol. I hope your having fun! Great poem here (I have a dollar once that disappeared the same way...lol)

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
6 posted 2000-01-26 07:47 AM


You naughty naughty teens....So some of you have been reading my "God-awful" stuff elsewhere?...Do your parents know where you've been? What you've been reading?..No wonder this generation has so many problems....Look at the garbage you've all been reading!!! LOL.....

Marilyn.....I see you're a moderator here? Oh boy...bet you were leary about reading my post weren't ya?...LOL.....I promise to behave whenever I post here......mostly..

chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
7 posted 2000-01-27 10:11 AM


very cute...i loved it!
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