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RedRose
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 6
St augustine Florida USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 05:13 PM


I Miss you
Too many days have gone by
Without the utter of
'I Love You" Tell me were
Did our flame go?
I want to know.

How do I hold in the pain I feel?
I want to make you see the love
I hold inside for you.

Touch me once more
The way you use to
I miss the passion we
Use to have.

If I had the chance to
Hold you close once
More, I would not tell
That I miss you, Or
That I can't go on
Without you…no
I would say, "I Love You


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Be BLind For A Moment, so you can see with your heart.

© Copyright 1999 RedRose - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-03 12:16 PM


I am enjoying your work.
I would like to see you touch on
other subject matter.
There is so much more to this life
than this concept you carry about love.
As if you need it to live or carry
your identity.
What are your other hobbies or interests?

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