Teen Poetry #2 |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
You Your mind, body Soul and heart I know inside I cannot part Your look so gentle Smile so sweet In an instant Goose bumps begin their creep Your hair so soft Eyes so tender My heart knows you Without even a hender All the beauty That you are Indeed your love Surpasses all I posted this for my friend, Jeff. He's beginning to write poems, and he would like to have some feed back. I told him about all of us <the family of friends> ![]() He knows my opinion ![]() (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Tell Jeff he's a poet in the making...and to kepe up the great work! I loved it! ![]() |
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