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ILoveSrfrs
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since 1999-11-14
Posts 69
California

0 posted 2000-01-15 06:53 PM



Since when do best friends love
And feel so close together
Say that they love eachother
And will until forever

Since when do best friends kiss
And hold eachother close
And if everyone should leave-
It'd be you i'd miss the most

Since when do best friends write eachother letters
Expressing their devotions
Telling them their secrets
Their feelings; their emotions

Since when do best friends cry
When the other made a mistake
And agree together on
All the risks that they will take

Since when do best friends
Dance slow and have a song
Who tell eachother when they're right,
And never when they're wrong

Since when do best friends love
Eachother since the start
-when someone always gets hurt
And ends up with a broken heart

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cougaryouth
Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 25

1 posted 2000-01-15 06:57 PM


wow, that is the best poem i have ever heard, hey I would like to get to know you my email is cougaryouth@yahoo.com please email me and lets talk.
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
2 posted 2000-01-15 09:58 PM


Nice...same feelings I had once.  Very lovely, and truly so.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 2000-01-16 05:44 PM


ooooooh... best friends who become lovers are the hardest to part from.. keep your head up... you will overcome..
great job at the poem also  

 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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foolinlove
New Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 5

4 posted 2000-01-16 09:32 PM


That's a very nice poem and the feelings you have for your friend and since the feelings mutual then you and that other person is very very lucky to have found each other and not everything ends up with broken hearts some will work out
Duchessofhearts
Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 13

5 posted 2000-01-16 10:47 PM


I love youre poem.I wish I had someone like that in my life.
Did this poem come from your own life?

ILoveSrfrs
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since 1999-11-14
Posts 69
California
6 posted 2000-01-17 12:05 PM


Thank you everyone for your posts.  Dutchessofhearts- thank you and yes, this was taken from my own life.  The guy I liked was also my best friend.
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
7 posted 2000-01-17 02:23 AM


I really enjoyed this poem. It is very nice to be with the guy you like who can understand you like your best friend does. Keep up the good work!
Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
8 posted 2000-01-18 07:53 PM


That was a ****ing sweet a$$ poem! I'v felt like that before to. Keep up the good work girl!!

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Singer1981
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
9 posted 2000-01-18 09:45 PM


I totally understand how you feel.  This has been exactly how i've been feeling lately, only it's completely one-sided.  Sometimes, when our closest friends are those of the opposite sex, we mistake simple friendly gestures for something more...and sometimes it really is that something more.  In either situation...it tests the friendship to its limit.  Hope everything works out all right!
~Sarah

ILoveSrfrs
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since 1999-11-14
Posts 69
California
10 posted 2000-01-18 11:31 PM


Wow! Thanks everyone for your really nice replies.  This poem is about my best friend, who I have a really special relationship with.  We're really close, but I always want more, and I don't know if he does.  Thank you all so much for the nice replies, they mean so much to me!!
Kitty
Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada
11 posted 2000-01-19 05:29 PM


Wow, amazing poem. Thats a tough situation to be in. I hope things work out for you.

 He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11

Kitty

Allysa
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Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden
12 posted 2000-01-21 03:57 PM


I really like your poem. I understand it well. I'm in love with my best friend and he was once in love with me, but our friendship kept us apart. He guides me and knows me inside and out. And it is only that around him I can be my true self.

 Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through.

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