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since 1999-11-23
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0 posted 2000-01-19 11:41 PM

                        If you need a friend,
                             I'm only a call away.
                       Remember dean's supporting you,
                             each and every day.

                         Your a beautiful young ladie,
                    don't ever let anybody steer you wrong.
                        I think about your sweet face,
                    it is what possesses me to right this song.

                     If you ever feel like you need to cry,
                              come cry on me.
                          Cause You know i'm real,
                       so much that I can make you see.

                        When you cried in front of me,
             I wanted to hold you and tell you it was going to be ok.
                    Cause your the sweetest girl I ever met,
                        and I still think that till this day.

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

© Copyright 2000 James Dean - All Rights Reserved
Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-19 11:54 PM

Wow, thats wonderful dean, I love it. I wish I could tell this to the object of my affection, but sadly it would probly only hurt the delicate situation

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-20 01:13 AM

You must be an excellent friend...
This was a great poem.
Keep it up, Dean.  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-01-20 09:24 AM

Deano...that poem was just....WOW! I love your work!   Keep it up  
Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-01-20 05:17 PM

Great poem. This girl is one lucky one to have a friend like you.

 He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11


since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
5 posted 2000-01-21 05:43 PM

Brought a tear to my eye Dean.  Can I come cry on your shoulder too?  LOL  Anyway, good job as always.

P.S.  In that first stanza.... "Remember dean's supporting you, each and every day."

I thought you were advertizing a cereal or something like that....  "Special D"

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