Teen Poetry #2 |
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Kitty Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20Paris, Ontario, Canada |
Alone, lost in the world, searching, searching for something, something that can't be found. Feelings, emotions hidden away, wanting, wanting something, something I can't have. Fire, passions I feel, looking, looking for someone, someone who doesn't exist. He has made everything beautiful in its time Ecclesiastes 3:11 Kitty |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I'm not very imaginative. So, I don't do well with making things up, but how about PASSION(s). I thought of it without even realizing you included the word "passions" until I read it over for a second time. ![]() (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
You should entitle it " Soul Searching ". When I read the poem I get the feeling that there are such strong passions that are restrained but, your in search of a soul that you can share them with. However, that soul dosen't exist! Anyway, in all this was an outstanding piece. |
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