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One Last Time...(finished)
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One Last Time...(finished) |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
I've surrendered to someone's will And lost the battles on the way I thought i knew what was happening Knew how to stop...everything I wasn't as strong as i imagined And weaker then what i perceived One last stillness of the days Of the mourning i've spent seizing I Didn't show all that i wanted Instead all that i didn't, pierced through And it left me with an eternity Of trying to do it over again... I've exhaled the last moments And breathed in the ones never had I've fallen one to many times And pray that this will be the last Torn by the loss, ripped by the pain The sight of you is what keeps me sane I don't know what's happening in me But it makes me want to cry to the skies For i can't stop what compels me To want to be with one who disregards The one who seems turn the other way The one...who keeps me beating... "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE [This message has been edited by Nights (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
It's really intriguing...keep going...I can't wait to read the rest  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Hey good job, I can't wait to see how it ends and were your going to take it to. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
can't wait to read the rest....(holing suspense is not one of my greater virtues, but for a fellow poet, i can wait) |
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