navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » One Last Time...(finished)
Teen Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic One Last Time...(finished) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56

0 posted 2000-01-19 06:14 PM

I've surrendered to someone's will
And lost the battles on the way
I thought i knew what was happening
Knew how to stop...everything
I wasn't as strong as i imagined
And weaker then what i perceived
One last stillness of the days
Of the mourning i've spent seizing
I Didn't show all that i wanted
Instead all that i didn't, pierced through
And it left me with an eternity
Of trying to do it over again...

I've exhaled the last moments
And breathed in the ones never had
I've fallen one to many times
And pray that this will be the last
Torn by the loss, ripped by the pain
The sight of you is what keeps me sane
I don't know what's happening in me
But it makes me want to cry to the skies
For i can't stop what compels me
To want to be with one who disregards
The one who seems turn the other way
The one...who keeps me beating...

 "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh
it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE

[This message has been edited by Nights (edited 01-20-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Nights - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-01-19 07:03 PM

It's really intriguing...keep going...I can't wait to read the rest  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
2 posted 2000-01-19 09:56 PM

Hey good job,  I can't wait to see how it ends and were your going to take it to.
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-01-20 09:40 AM

can't wait to read the rest....(holing suspense is not one of my greater virtues, but for a fellow poet, i can wait)  
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » One Last Time...(finished)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary