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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-01-19 03:18 PM

I want to be beside you
I want to hold your hand
Take moonlit walks together
Oh...what heaven that would be!

But I can't tell you this
For I cannot without tears
My love for you can not be voiced
For fear you'll turn away

I want to be beside you
To feel your warmth
To feel the touch
To feel the love...

I wish I could be there
Wherever you are right now
Looking into your eyes
With speechless affection

I need no words
To tell you how I feel
To show you the depths of my soul
It's written in my eyes...my heart..
For you..

New poem..what do ya'll think?

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-01-19 04:25 PM

Wonderful poem. It hits rather close to home, except I did tell the one I loved how I felt and she did turn away

sigh... sometimes love doesnt work out. Good luck to you.

I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Kitty
Junior Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-01-19 04:58 PM

I loved the new poem. I hope it turns out great for you.

He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11

Kitty

Kitty
Junior Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-01-19 04:59 PM

This poem made me feel like I was in your situation, I can't wait to hear more of your work.

[This message has been edited by Kitty (edited 01-19-2000).]

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

4 posted 2000-01-19 05:18 PM

I liked the poem, alot. One thing that's harder is when you both love each other, but don't know it OR when you both know it because you both said so, but one person doesn't show it enough for you to believe it.

keep writing...

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

5 posted 2000-01-19 05:32 PM

I loved your poem. It really hit home for me, 'cuz I've got the same feelings right now for the person I wrote my poem, "More Than Friends?" for. I'm afraid to tell him how I feel, but do you blame me? Hope to see more of your work soon!

Angel6917

"Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

6 posted 2000-01-19 06:12 PM

Once again...beautiful writing...you never cease to amaze me!

Keep it up!
~Sarah

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-01-19 09:05 PM

I really like this poem and can relate to it too. I went through the same thing with my boyfriend and we've been together for 16 months now. Hope everything works out for the best with you two

. I loved your poem, and hope to see more from you soon.

~Susie~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

8 posted 2000-01-20 09:21 AM

Thanks for the replies! I really appreciated them! I lost my poem i was going to post..i hope i find it soon..it was one of my best

thanks again!

--Lavada

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