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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-01-20 09:32 AM

This is my sister's 2nd poem:

Here I stand
All alone
Not at all seen
By anyone

In a corner
By myself
Everyone talking
Amongst themselves

Hey! family and friends
Can't you see?
You're talking to everyone
Everyone...but me

Still ignored
Though I cry
I think to myself
I wonder...Why?

The only thing
That I can see
Is that for me to be forgotten
Is meant to be

Reply please!  

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
1 posted 2000-01-20 12:04 PM

That's really sad!  I'm sorry that you feel ignored...but this was a really great poem.  Right to the point! Keep it up.  

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-20 12:39 PM

Sometimes I feel this way, and it hurts a little too much. The emotions & the expression came across very well.  I could just picture someone standing there so unhappy just looking around & waiting.  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

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