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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
This is my sister's 2nd poem: Here I stand All alone Not at all seen By anyone In a corner By myself Everyone talking Amongst themselves Hey! family and friends Can't you see? You're talking to everyone Everyone...but me Still ignored Though I cry I think to myself I wonder...Why? The only thing That I can see Is that for me to be forgotten Is meant to be Reply please!  "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
That's really sad! I'm sorry that you feel ignored...but this was a really great poem. Right to the point! Keep it up. ~Sarah |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Sometimes I feel this way, and it hurts a little too much. The emotions & the expression came across very well. I could just picture someone standing there so unhappy just looking around & waiting.  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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