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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I never thought my feelings for you could be so strong, so powerful, that you would become such an important person in my life. I never knew I would love you so much that everything I believed before would become a question in my mind. I'm so happy with you; you make me feel important, and so safe when you hold me so tightly in your loving arms. Our friendship means the world to me, but I want you to know; sometimes I want to be more than "Just Friends;" I want a realationship that says "I Will Love You Forever." "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I liked your poem..how about the title "Unexpected"....sounds suitable..don't you think? --Lavada |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Lavada: "Unexpected" does sound pretty good for a title, so I'll take it into consideration. Thank you much for responding!! Angel6917 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Well, Kristi what can I say. You pulled off another great poem. I know I can say for myself that your work has been a great insperation for me to write more and probably has for the rest of the forum. It's almost like you chalenge me everytime you post more work. You have great style and have captuerd your emotions so well, anyone could read this and know how you felt at that moment in time. Great work and best of luck on your next piece. I have to go now and write one for myself. |
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