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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120

0 posted 2000-01-18 11:52 PM


Hate is a powerfull feeling.
Takes over your mind and heart.
Makes you do thing’s you wouldn’t normally do.
If you act like this hate is in you.
Hate can take over your soul
make you think like a devil that is out of control.

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-18 11:55 PM

Cool poem, very angry.  
Would you mind explaining a little of what has put you in such a spiteful mood towards the world? I am very curious. I like to learn about others inspirations for their poetry.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
2 posted 2000-01-19 12:17 PM

What happened?  It's a very good poem.  I understand where it came from - I've written many poems on the subject, but I won't post them...

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-01-19 02:46 PM

Some days I feel exactly what you just described. I did a few things thing when I was angry, that I now wish I never did, but NO ONE can go back in time. Just always remember to think before you act.  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

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