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Teen Poetry #2

My Angel

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-01-18 11:59 PM

She exsists in the depths of my heart
She showed me thats all you need
to bring a smile to your face
She touched my tired soul
she took me to a different place
Where not what you look like or
what you say is what counts
It is if you let you heart guide
you along your way
she cleared the fog and haze
she showed me a better day.

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-01-19 11:50 AM

i liked your poem...really! It was great! Show's how much you love her..am i right?

-Lavada

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

2 posted 2000-01-19 12:20 PM

I loved this poem. It's so heartfelt, and I bet you care about this person a lot. Keep the sweet poems coming!

Angel6917

"Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

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