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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
I've done it again I've fallen in love with you Your like a magnet Why do you do the things you do? You draw me to you Then push me away You'll be my boyfriend- If you feel like it that day Your so nice sometimes Ask for the key to my heart But then you lock it up And it's ripping me apart You hold me like a puppet To put on a little show And I still can't help myself It's so hard to say no I want you so much I need you so bad Why couldn't you realize all the possibilites we had? I've done it again I've fallen in love with you Your like a magnet Why do you do the things you do? |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Me like! Another poem that seems to touch feelings inside. Lovely, truly so. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ohhh.... yes. There are so many people in this room with love problems, or everyone loves to write on the topic. ILoveSrfrs, I like how you sysmbolized love like a magnet. It's so true, but sometime you'll find yourself attracted to the wrong one. Good job. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
the flow to this poem was very good... and i feel the frustration.... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
i love it  i can really feel what you are talking about...i am the type that falls in love easily...hey, they even say im easily loved, but then again...im even more easily forgotten...~~~Tamma~~~ |
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