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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Death knocked upon his door little did he know what was in store Death did not win the fight because he strugled it every night death aproches him again and again with my love death will not win life is stronger then death Death will not steal his breath He will never die or have to say good by cause a peace of him is inside me nothing can divide me "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I just wanted to say great poem. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Dude, my man Deano..... what has gottin into you? I like it. You work has all the sudden become VERY powerful. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very powerful (like Jer said) with a hint of sweetness. ~  ~(:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Dean: I totally agree with Jer and Stephani, your poem was very powerful and sweet at the same time. So far everything of yours I've read has impacted me in some way or another, and this one does, too. ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Dean!! what ever you did I must say I love it! You have developed a syle that suits you to a T. Wonderful work my friend.  |
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