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Teen Poetry #2

wartime poverty

The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 2000-01-15 04:05 PM

IM not so sure of who you are,
you tell everyone I've gone to far
but for me, your just a dream.
A silent night ending in screams.

so in you i did confide
but u were still not satisfied
and since that night i met your needs
you have denied ever knowing me

but i don't mind anyway
I'll speak my mind anyway
and I'll find it anyway
anyway i go

so i seek revenge on you
never really cared for what you do
seductive lies, make up your self
so use them elsewhere on someone else

I wish i were a poet

cougaryouth
Junior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 25

1 posted 2000-01-15 04:31 PM

And he does it again another stunning poem, the title through me off of the meaning I thought war and got something totally different bravo!

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

2 posted 2000-01-16 06:23 PM

i sense a bit of hostility.. bitterness.. but i feel ur poem.. u did a wonderful job....

Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

3 posted 2000-01-17 04:57 PM

thanx

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