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Look Into My Eyes Tell Me What You See,
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Look Into My Eyes Tell Me What You See, |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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Look Into My Eyes Tell Me What You See, Then Tell Me How I Feel Since IM Not Sure Myself IM lost....for all I see in many, instead of one. Leaving the decision harder, more commonly left undone. For the only passion I can find, is for someone else's views. I my self have no passions since my days of you. For I cant find where IM lost, or where I am to begin. This dying pain of memories left for me to win. But all they are , Are memories of the guy I once was never again shall I feel that way of living just because. At first you were my purpose, for now you are my thought but I forgot to act of who I am. which shows me left untaught. They used to look at me and think of who I am wishing one day to be like me a completely open man. For now I look at pictures. Ones of me again knowing thetas its me whose wishing now for once to be that man. Mike Sacks 1/12/2000 I wish i were a poet |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hey, I really like your poem! I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
Thanx,basicly im refering to hpow i wish i was back tot he way i was wen i was younger where i was so much smoother and everything worked out...basicly b/c i had no knoledge of wat the world is around me with all this blunnt hatred....and murder I wish i were a poet |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey you, poet boy. You are a very good poet and I enjoy your works. I hope to read more of your works in the future. Your poetry is indulging and mind captivating. Keep up the good work. Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
alyysa,i been on this sight for a while if u wanna see mor eof mine look up all my posts |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
You suprise me mike this is astounding one of your best |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
It was afluke ,im trying ot write now and i cant I wish i were a poet |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
i must take back my last reply |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I love your poem, and I hope to see more. I can relate, other than being female, because I've felt that way many times. |
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