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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
<div align="Center">Soo Not Love like a deer trapped in headlights she was trapped in his glance for sore eyes he was a handsome sight surprised, he asked her to dance she fell in love so quickly he fed her all the lines and such no time wasted, he asked so discreetly but to her gracious principles she stuck but like a deer trapped in headlights she was trapped once again but in his arms, in a grip so tight force and torture and violations poor dear left broken in the rain learned the lessons of lust in the worst way poor dear left broken with her pain not wanting to see the light of another day… </div><!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- </font> [This message has been edited by Star Fairy 2 (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Very powerful poem, but I am curious as to whether you meant deer(as in the 4 legged mammal) or it was an intentional typo, referring to a loved one? I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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cougaryouth Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 25 |
Very true poem, I am at a loss of words but this is just one of the worlds wicked truths. Very good at describing it without getting graphic I vote thumbs up |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
thank you so much... and i corrected my typo .. hehe.. oopz! thanx a lot.. appreciate it... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This happens all too often, I'm afraid. It's an awful thing. You did a good job with this, keep it up.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Nice...very lovely indeed. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
this one wasnt written from experience... just running on a metaphor... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Oh wow...this poem is very powerful indeed. The metaphor of the deer is pure genius...... awesome job! :.) Vreni |
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