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nicnac8
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 2000-01-15 01:05 AM


Forever in debtI shall stay.
For the love you have given;
I cannot repay.
I am grateful and give thanks
for every given day.
Forever in debt I shall stay.

In anticipation I wait,
and no one may ever be able to relate.
I hope that there will be no delays.
Forever in debt I shall stay.

With you, my skies are never gray.
Thinking only sweet thoughts of
you in my bed where I lay.
Forever in debt I shall stay.

Thankful for all of the love I get.
Everything that i've done with you
I'll never regret.
And all of the fun-
how could i ever forget.

This is why I am
forever in debt-
and forever in debt I shall stay-
so please;
please, don't ever walk away.


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Astraea
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 2000-01-15 01:11 AM


Very lovely.  I liked it a lot and could relate.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
2 posted 2000-01-15 01:31 AM


thanx 4 taking the time out 2 read my poem. I really appreciate it.

~nicnac8

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