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I Was on Top!
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I Was on Top! |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
I Was On The Top! Life was perfect, like a newly oiled machine! It was all running smooth. I felt special, I was a someone. I was the happiest I had ever been in my whole life. I was Queen, on top of the world, you were the one holding me up. Then one day that all changed, you drifted away, you must of lost interest or I was just a big burden on your shoulders. Because you dropped me just like that. As you walked off you didn't even look back, not even a glance over your shoulder to see if I was ok. No condolence what so ever. There was no warning that you'd be leaving, not even a sign of a breakup or even a goodbye. That's when I hit rock bottom, I hit reality. You were no longer here to hold me up. I finally woke up from my happy dream to the fact that you were only a dream. And again Im just another face in the crowd. ©Misty Brendle [This message has been edited by Misty (edited 01-10-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
I think just about every person on this earth has felt this way one time or another. It's great topic to write about and I think it's the first time I have read one about this subject on this form. Good job. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
very good good flow expressive too very nice *sorry i am at a loss for words? Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks for the replies! ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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