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Teen Poetry #2

Ashley Hawkins

foolinlove
New Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 5

0 posted 2000-01-12 05:46 PM

Every time you touch me
I fill as shiver run up and down my spine
and When I'm with you I feel like I could fly
It's a feeling I can't hide when I'm without you
I feel like I could die
As long as your by my side
I can live forever it seems
as the moon shines down on me
my heart opens up for it's gleem
For you are the moon of my night and the
sun of my day
and all I have to say
is that I love you more every day

              Written for somebody
              Really special I
              Haven't met yet
              but hope that I do.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-01-12 07:27 PM

Lovely piece for the one you had yet to meet. I only have one thing to comment on. You can only live without one person and that is YOU. Try and become a person that you can live well with. We all can live without someone, that doesn't mean we want to.

Thanks for the read.

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