Teen Poetry #2 |
June (please respond) |
LoveBug
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This is a rough draft, so I'll take any suggestions to make it better! Thanks June There’s nothing I dread more than June There’s no word that scares me so Because June is the dreaded month That you will have to go June is supposed to be the month of growth The month all living things thrive But my soul will be dark and wilting I don’t know if I can survive What will I do after you leave? How will I live after you’re gone? People tell me I’ll get though But I don’t think I can carry on I’ve always known that you would have to go With the fair month of June But I never thought that this month Would approach us so, so soon There are a lot of things in life to dread But none of them takes my breath As the thought of you leaving my life in June It’s a fate much worse than death You see me as a friend, and nothing else But I love you as much more But will I tell you this before June? I’ve never said it before I just hope that, when you leave That terrible June day And go on to live you life And go so far away That you will remember me Because I will remember you And that, sometimes, you will think of me Because that’s all I’ll ever do And I hope that you will think back As you are enjoying living so far away That maybe, you might just care As you think back to that June day Care that my heart was broken And, maybe come and visit soon Because you’ll remember that terrible day That terrible time in June ~LoveBug~ "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Jer Member
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I can feel your sadness in this one LoveBug. Don't worry about thing. I'm sure something is bound to happen sooner or later. Plus I know you will survive if and when he leaves in June. Just remember.... Love comes and gose, but friendship is forever. Ohh P.S. Not to be rude but.... I wish June would come quicker so I can get out of school. I need that Major in Fire Sciences. |
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LoveBug
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Thanks, Jer! I hope love DOES come to me soon. I hope it's him, becuase I don't know if I'll have the strenth to look for someone else after he leaves. "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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