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foolinlove New Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 5 |
hey here's a quick poem i wrote for a woman who i like but she don't like me and i have a girlfriend I have a secret love for a angel i believe imy school She was sent down from above saying something to her would make me a fool My heart beats for my girlfriend and her and my mind is in between I wish it could differ but to her i'm just a friend my life depends on love and my death depends on hate Please tell me how you like it |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hey! This poem is really good. I notice there are a lot of love problems in here, but as Shakespeare said "The course of true love never did run smooth" "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Secret love huh? Sounds like you have a major problem having a girlfriend and to have feelings for someone else. |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
We all may have feelings for more than one person, yet i beleive there is only one person that one can have TRUE feelings for.(at least at the same time) Perhaps, you don't really like ur gf. Think about it. |
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