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Teen Poetry #2

You've hurt me so much

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-12-27 12:40 PM

How can you not realize,
The amt. of pain you’ve caused?
How can you dare look into my eyes?
And say, ”What did I do?
Come on baby I miss you.”

Why don’t you understand-
How much you hurt me when you say
You want to hold my hand?
I know that you don’t mean it at all.
And that’s what makes it so bad.
Because I know, together we can never be.

You have hurt me so much.
But what hurts the most is that you do not even know,
That you hurt me.
I was in such pain inside.
Why? Just because you had too much pride?

I just wanted to tell you,
What you made me go through.
I know that you don’t care, and have no felling for me.
So you might as well set me free.

[This message has been edited by Olga (edited 01-12-2000).]

Marissa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-25

Posts 20

1 posted 1999-12-27 09:22 PM

Good poem....i can relate to it.
Keep up the nice work!

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 1999-12-27 11:41 PM

Olga...pretty much everyone has felt this before and you've expressed it very well. Trust me, the pain will lesson and love will find you once again, or else why would we still be here??

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 2000-01-03 02:06 PM

Thanks. Perhaps you're right star board, things always have their own way of working out.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2000-01-03 03:53 PM

This is a very good poem. The little rhymes every now and then make it even more likeable. You're a good writer. Please check out some of my poems. Thankx.

Allysa

Angela16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-19

Posts 37
USA

5 posted 2000-01-03 05:31 PM

that is an awesome poem!!
Keep up the great work!

Angela

Angela16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-19

Posts 37
USA

6 posted 2000-01-03 05:32 PM

that is an awesome poem!!
Keep up the great work!

Angela

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

7 posted 2000-01-12 09:53 PM

Thanx, I'll check out ur poems too.

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