Chess Pro In! (Anagram. Stubborn Me)

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Teen Poetry #2

Chess Pro In! (Anagram. Stubborn Me)

edgar_derby
New Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 9
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-12 12:06 PM

This is an edited version of my previous post "Triumver-suck".

i'm coming round the corner
looking for
epiphany
but all i see
is crap in me
and crap in you
but i dont want to.

i want to utilize
the work i plagiarize
for lately i've been
obsessed with sin
and i want to clear my heart and yours.

i spout and shout
wanna listen? i dont
cause the words arent mine yet
they belong to Frank J. highschool
and little Kurty Vonnegut
and the duke of earl.

i dont wanna be critical but
someone in here does cut
off my inner monologue and i'm
floating like the vodka lime.
where did you come from, hate?
will my little life disintegrate
under the weight
of you?
melodrama and sneezing
they're the only things i can do.

"This is angst speaking,
And I have a little freaking
ditty i'd like to sing
so tips your hats and bing
your cups and use your forks wisely:

Often i'm the bad guy
but now i've got a white horse
and i'm your next good excuse
so remember to look proud
when you fall hard for me.

In conclusion: be fruitful,_____
and with any luck
you'll come running back
running back
for more."

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-01-12 07:38 PM

Stuborn is a good quality. I will take credit for limiting the language you use at this site but I will not take the credit for cutting off your inner dialoge. You sound like a very intelligent young man and I would like to read your thoughts, as long as they are presented in a respectful fashion.

edgar_derby
New Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 9
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2000-01-12 11:51 PM

the title is an anagram. that was the point.
anyway, thank you marilyn.

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