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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Heres another one for your reading pleasure, hope ya like it. The Four Most Painful Words Lets never again kiss Lets never hold hands Lets ignore each other Just walk away Just cry in shame Just want for her Be unhappy for what could have been Be a curse to myself Be self-destructive Friends don't hurt friends like this Friends care, they do not turn their heads Friends move in the opposite direction that we do Sigh…… Why does it have to hurt so? |
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edgar_derby New Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 9Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
sorry about the girl. i know precisely how you feel; i just found out that the girl i'm smitten with is a lesbian. anyway, i know. try making fun of melodrama. write an entire weepy angry piece, then say, "and then i sneezed, and since then everyone has called me boogerman." |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
I revised the poem a little. I decided to make each line 4 words, to further work with the title. Also, if you didnt notice, the 4 words it actually refers to begin each sentence in the 4 sections. The Four Most Painful Words Lets never again kiss Lets never hold hands Lets ignore each other Just walk away now Just cry in shame Just want for her Be unhappy with life Be my own curse Be hateful of myself Friends don't hurt friends Friends don't ignore pain Friends always move forward Sigh... Why does it have to hurt so? |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Hey mistikman that was clever. I useualy see stuff like that but I have to admit, I didn't see it until you pointed it out. I like it. It reminds me of the problem I have. Those truly are the most dreaded words to a guy. |
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loverofmany New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 1Perth Amboy, NJ, 08861 |
So what do you say to somebody you hate? Is anyone trying to bring trouble your way? What is all things, and a BLOOD in your way? Just study your tape with NWA One day I was walking by, With a walkman on, When I caught a guy Give me and awkward eye I strangled him there in the parking lot with his car knot I don't give a F*ck if it's dark or not I'm harder than me trying to park a Dodge.. But I'm drunk as f*ck Right next to a humongous truck in a 2-car garage. I got 2 broken legs trying to walk it off.. F you, too b*tch, "CALL THE COPS!" I'll kill you and those loud ass, mother f*cking barking dogs! And when the cops came through, me and Dre still next to a burnt down house. With a can full of can and hand full of matches - Still haven't found out! So from here on out, I'm a corporate tool. Today's the day - Tomorrow's Anew. While you around I'm still trying to choke you to death with a Chareston Chew. CICA CICA CICA - Slim Eddie Hotter than a set of Twin Babies In a Mercedes (Benz) With the windows up When the tint goes up to the mid 80's Calling men 'Ladies'. Sorry, Doc, but I've been crazy. There's a way that you can save me. It's ok go with him, Halley. Nowadays People like to talk, But they don't know what to say Nothing comes out When they move their lips It's a just a bunch of gibberish And the Muthaf'er act like they Forgot about Dre. Nowadays People like to talk, But they don't know what to say Nothing comes out When they move their lips It's a just a bunch of gibberish And the Muthaf'er act like they Forgot about Dre... Peace sLiM EddiE |
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MyseriousR New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 1Perth Amboy, NJ, 08861 |
I thought of this poem the first time I saw her smile. Your Smile When you smile my heart stops by such beuty. When you smile my heary is fulfilled. When you smile I no longer feel alone. When you smile it takes my breath away. When you smile I feel no pain. And when you smile I thank God everyday that I have you. From Raymond,to my girl Damaris. |
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