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Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-02 11:38 PM

<font face="Arial, Arial, Verdana" color="#871f78" size="2">Our lives are short, why do we waste
The minutes ticking by?
On hateful thoughts and ugly things,
That rob us of our time.
Animosity and cruelty,
Blacken out our skies.
They taint our hearts and ruin a soul,
Causing other ones to cry.
Enjoy your life just as it is,
Be grateful for what you have.
Love fully from the core of you,
Each day as if your last,
The things you find with in your reach,
Are not things from your past.
Today is all we really have,
Live it as you must.
Tomorrow may just never come,
Who will be the sorry one?
</font>

[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-03-2000).]

Rodeo Jones
Junior Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 18
San Jose, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-01-03 12:13 PM

Nicely done, the reader said
I like the way it flows.
It goes so well, I hardly could
Believe it wasn't prose

And I agree whole heartedly
With the message that you give
Of pure and wonderous lifestyles
That so few of us do live.

Sorry about that---^
sometimes I do these things...

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-01-03 12:41 PM

Mr. Jones, please feel free to comment to any of the works here in verse. It is the greatest compliment of all. To inspire one to write a reply in verse. I compliment you on your reply...nicely said and well written.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-01-31 09:39 AM

Bumping up for those interested.

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

4 posted 2000-01-31 06:30 PM

Another great poem Marilyn, great advice on how to live ones life. Carpe Diem Baby!!!

I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-01-31 09:49 PM

Very nice poem....I think it says a lot just in the few lines. Nicely done.

Salooma

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-01-31 10:21 PM

Great advice, my friend! This says so much with very little words. Keep it up, I would personally like to see more here!

*Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

7 posted 2000-01-31 10:49 PM

Thanks Marilyn... I can see this one very clearly.

Penelope
Junior Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 31

8 posted 2000-01-31 10:58 PM

I really like this poem.

Very good message. Can't wait to see more.

-Penny

My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn.

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