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BlOoD TiEs
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since 1999-10-02
Posts 30
New York City

0 posted 1999-12-29 08:34 PM

I hate when all I ask is for a little respect and I get treated like a reject.

I hate when I dont know what to do because I can't tell whats fake or true.

I hate when I try to be the best I can, yet still get treated as if I'm not a man.

I hate the way you critique my every flaw, like stiff jabs to my jaw.

I hate the way nothing goes right, needing the sunshine only at night.

I hate the way the world is so brutal, trying to live happy nearly futile.

 Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits.

© Copyright 1999 Wiser - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 1999-12-29 08:36 PM

Sad, but true.  But it's those little things that make the world truly lovely when you think about it.  Very nice.


"No change, no pause, no hope, yet I endure."

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 1999-12-29 11:08 PM

How very true.  I've felt this way.  Why is the world going against you when all you want to do is please it!?
You've expressed it well here, BLOod TiEs.


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