Teen Poetry #2 |
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k4u247 New Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 4warrenton,va,us |
Never never say i love you, if you really dont care. never talk about your feelings, if they really aren't there. never hold my hand, if your going to break my heart. never say your going to, if you dont plan to start. never look into my eyes, is all you do is lie. never say hello, if you really mean goodbye. if you really mean forever, then say you will try. never say forever, because forever makes me cry. Only happiness comes to mind when i think of love, thats why i cherish it. why do you? |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oh, I'm speachless.... That is beautiful. Heh, I don't know what else to say, but I really like this poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. ;) |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
i really liked this one. it's so true. good job. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
great job. i like this heaps! those exact thoughts were running through my mind a short while ago ![]() anywho........keep up the good work ![]() Bec ![]() |
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*~*~*butterfly*~*~* New Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 6Minnesota |
that was BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! it is sooo true and very well spoken! i love this one..... great job!! keep it up ..... cant wait to hear more from you ![]() ~love~ *kasandra* "When faced with a challenge search for a way, not a way out." -unknown |
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Gasper4ever New Member
since 2003-03-01
Posts 3virginia |
okay this is really good but i know for a fact that you didnt make it up yourself i've herd it in other places. but it is really a good poem always -Gasper's girl- |
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Sweetie01 Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28NJ, USA |
I've heard this in other places too...but, you added a little more to it Great Job....like to hear more from you Amanda<3 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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