Teen Poetry #2 |
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Question or Truth |
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Mario21 Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 11 |
Questions or Truth The end of one day yet the beginning of another Losing one love but finding one more lover Coming to the end or is it really the start Walking in the light or is it the dark Going to the right or is it the left Going upstairs or is it coming down the steps These are perceptions we have of the world Is a diamond a diamond or to you is it a pearl Does gold have a shine or is it a silvery glow Does a river run wild or does it have a calm flow Are you headed in a direction or spinning round and round Is your life full of noises or does it not make a sound Are you flying high above or diggin down below Do you have an idea where you’re going or you just don’t know Are you on top of the world or do you feel like nothin Do you have real friends or are you surround by people who be frontin These are questions that I ask myself Do I have real value or do I just sit on the shelf Left there because no one really likes No longer can I be called the Moon Lit Knight I’ve lost my cool nature had, had a drop in style My essence of life has been reduced to that of a child Nothing but a screw up nothing but a fool Now how would you feel if that were to be you. By:Mario “Da Kid” 21 Let it be done! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
This one makes me think...great exercise! keep on writing! ![]() "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
you are an amazing writer..i love your poetry! i look forward to reading it..if thats strange.. ![]() |
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eagle Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39singapore |
That was Great! ![]() It makes you stop and think about your life. Can't wait to see more of your poems ![]() |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
This was good. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Jinx New Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 7Wilkes-Barre PA |
Excellent, I believe that in the lines you expressed a truth, the world is only as good or bad as you see it. |
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