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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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An Unguided Love |
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ConderE Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29TX, USA |
An Unguided Love I wander through the dark Trying to make a spark That may turn into a fire A Desire For someone That will come into my life And make it worthwhile She has come And quick as a flash Stole my heart But it longed for another One that was everything that I ever dreamed. But both have a place in my heart I can’t choose one without my world falling apart. But I was too quick. And didn’t follow my heart The one that I long Is like a beautiful song She is always on my mind And I wish that I had taken the time To realize that you are my one, my dream |
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ConderE Junior Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 29TX, USA |
Please write and post your replies on my poem. I would appreciate it. Thank You. ConderE |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I like the way you write this is good! First you should have love for God, Second love for yourself, THEN other friendships and loves will be put upon you as blessings. Anyone who has a heart that can share like yours will have no problem connecting with someone VERY special. |
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