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Teen Poetry #2

At the dance

LoveAngel2000
Junior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 11
Knoxville, Tenessee (home of the Inbreds)

0 posted 1999-10-02 10:35 AM

It hurt so bad
it cut even worse
Bad at the end
but just a little at first

My heart was aching,
my bones were breaking,
I really didn't know what to do
and it was all because of you

Why can't you see,
why can't you realize
all of the love
I see in your eyes

Were all those kisses,
all those hugs
just to be warm,

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 10:38 AM

Keep an open heart
as you show
in this writing
which is quite good
and flows nicely!

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