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ReDrOseS
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since 1999-10-07
Posts 4
California

0 posted 1999-10-09 12:01 PM


Why can't you be the same?
You act so different with "the crowd"
As if all you want is fame
With me, you're not so very loud

I feel like the only one
The one who knows the inner you
You make it seem like you're having fun
When I know you're just trying to impress your crew

Although I can't do anything about it
I will be the girl to know
You're really only hiding it
And obviously not letting it show

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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-02 07:24 PM


I suppose alot of us were like that
at one time or another.
Peer Pressures, Popularity,Reputations.
Most of it well really all of it
the ego in control.
If you love them let them go,
if it was meant to be they will return.
Very nicely written.

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