»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #2
»
broken hearted
| Teen Poetry #2 |
|
broken hearted |
|
|
BOO63 New Member
since 1999-11-29
Posts 1 |
HIDING IN THE ASHES OF LOVE THAT FELL APART KNOWING HOW CLOSE THE PAST IS AND TRYING TO GET OVER A BROKEN HEART HOW DO YOU GO ON AND TELL YOURSELF IT'S ALRIGHT WHEN A PART OF YOU IS GONE AND YOU CAN'T GET THROUGH THE NIGHT WHEN YOU CAN'T LOOK IN THE MIRROR CAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHO YOU ARE YOU'RE CAUGHT IN ALL YOUR FEAR AND YOU CAN'T GO VERY FAR YOU REMEMBER ALL THE PAIN AND THE LOVE THAT WENT AWAY YOU'RE DROWNING IN THE RAIN AND DREAMING OF A BRIGHTER DAY |
||
| © Copyright 1999 BOO63 - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A very sad and heartfelt poem.....I can identify with the pain you're feeling now Boo63...I think almost eveyone at one time, at least, in their life, has experienced the emotions you are going through when losing someone we truly care about. Your piece is written from the heart and written well...! Thank you for sharing... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
||
|
Stephani Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32massachusetts~usa |
been there * done that it happens to EVERYONE very well written ------------------ (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend No matter if you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Boy, you have some talent..nice flow, wonderfully done...I can relate to this. Keep it up!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
||
|
Krut Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27Adams, Wi U.S.A |
that was really cool..ive been there too and in knew exactly the feelings u felt when u wrote this....good job ------------------ ~lifes a journey not a destination...~ Aerosmith |
||
|
chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
very nice poem! ive felt that way many times and ive realized only time heals a broken heart. keep up the good work |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||