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Kevin
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Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-11-30 12:26 PM


Humble eyes watch from the corner
A room filled with our poetry.
Each offers up a world of wisdom
draped round insecuriy.

Such beauty lies within our words,
Take pride in what you have conceived.
"need feedback" you say in desperation,
then linger round for posts recieved.

When only one can truley tell,
the goods and bad of poetry,
untill you find yourself my friends
you'll drown in insecurity.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Erin123
Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 13
Chicago, IL
1 posted 1999-11-30 12:38 PM


i really liked this, and you are so right. it is important to be secure with yourself. thanks for the words of wisdom.

*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28
minnesota
2 posted 1999-11-30 04:10 PM


PERFECT! i dont think anyone could have written that any better than you did, i see your point well and it is the truth! nice work

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"Rely on your instincts and trust your heart."
--unknown
~*~*~butterfly~*~*~

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