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Teen Poetry #2

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roxy16
Junior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 13
Lithia Springs,GA,U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-05 04:35 PM

My cover and my pages
Are worded differently

My cover has many blemishes
and is small.
When you look at my cover you think
What happened to her.
My corners are torn and worn.

Yet my pages are different
see for yourself.

My pages read...
a girl with a warm heart and soul,
Who brings happiness,
Who loves,
Who cares.
She wants a different life
then remembers
just how great her's really is.
Now we find a page is blank,
that's where she needs to seek,
deep inside.

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Melinda Lawrence

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 11:41 AM

I can't wait to read on!
Good imagery.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-02 06:54 PM

I'd like to know how you fill in the blank page. Write about it and post it here.
This was a nice piece.

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