|Teen Poetry #2|
|That Makes Me Sad|
since 1999-10-03Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
When negative thoughts run through my head, like love runs away from you...
When I look at you and your eyes dance away like a spark of fire...
When reality slams its reality, like you slam on my soul...
When I become not an angel, but a lust for you...
When the one thing I want in life is pounded like a nail...
When advice becomes an echo, like water becomes mist...
When breathing hurts cause you can't exhale...
When I lack of that one word strength...
When you are crying and hurt, and I don't know what to say...
When I stand all alone in a great big crowd...
When emotions slip through my fingers, like tears down my cheeks...
When a fragrance of mind is found, and a fragment of joy is lost...
When you want me to be so perfect because you fear that I'm not...
When you are my light that I can never have...
When a hyacinth becomes a weed...
That Makes Me Sad
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since 1999-12-28Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
You've made me sad too.
This is powerful.
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
I like the way you laid out this poem and the resolution. Very good!
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