Someone Just Burst My Bubble

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Teen Poetry #2

Someone Just Burst My Bubble

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-10-01 03:09 PM

I had the world in my hands you see
A good mood was being had
But as soon as I walked into that hated room
Someone just had to burst my bubble.

I was floating free
You see in my bubble, I was happy and free
But then I hid
And I did not give
Then, I wasn't free.

You see, my good mood was over
In seconds, gone with the wind
Because all it takes to ruin my day
Is someone to simply do this.
Soemone just has to burst my bubble.
POP!
And now it is gone.

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-01 03:23 PM

With this type of talent
your bubble should never POP!
Besides we really can't rely on people
for true joy, God would NEVER burst
your bubble.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-01 04:28 PM

Some people are so unhappy that they cannot stand to see other people happy so they try to bring you down any way they can to their level. They can't succeed unless "you" allow it to happen. Noone can burst your bubble unless you let them. DON'T.
Nice piece.

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