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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2000-02-21 11:11 PM

You know how i get in these really deep moods.
And i just sit here, thinking about the
past, present, and future.
Well i'm having one of those moods tonight.

Now, when i think of the past,

i no longer think of all my mistakes.
i think of all the times that we have spent together
The couple of days at our beach,
the summer days full of excitement.

When i think of the present,

i think of how lucky i am
to have you still loving me.
Even though i don't deserve it,
you're still here caring for me.

When i think of the future,

i think of our lives together,
and how it will turn out.
i wonder what our house and kids will look like,
and how they will act.
Will they have my hair and your eyes?
Or will it be the other way around?

© Copyright 2000 Lovejoy - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-22 10:55 AM

Hi, I enjoyed your poem.  I like the structure with Past, Present, and Future.  It flows very well.  
Welcome to Passions!  Look forward to seeing more of your work.

Paul Hoekman
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 2000-03-01 12:34 PM

Well done!
I enjoyed this very much.
So exciting to think what the future
could bring, with this kind of writing
you obviously have quite a future
no matter what you do.

Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-03-01 12:51 PM

First of all...I would like to Welcome you to here I go...


Second of all, This is a really great first post. I hope to read more!  

stay cool


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

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