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I Think of You |
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Lovejoy New Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 1 |
You know how i get in these really deep moods. And i just sit here, thinking about the past, present, and future. Well i'm having one of those moods tonight. Now, when i think of the past, i no longer think of all my mistakes. i think of all the times that we have spent together The couple of days at our beach, the summer days full of excitement. When i think of the present, i think of how lucky i am to have you still loving me. Even though i don't deserve it, you're still here caring for me. When i think of the future, i think of our lives together, and how it will turn out. i wonder what our house and kids will look like, and how they will act. Will they have my hair and your eyes? Or will it be the other way around? |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hi, I enjoyed your poem. I like the structure with Past, Present, and Future. It flows very well. Welcome to Passions! Look forward to seeing more of your work. Danny |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well done! I enjoyed this very much. So exciting to think what the future could bring, with this kind of writing you obviously have quite a future no matter what you do. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
First of all...I would like to Welcome you to Passions...so here I go... WELCOME TO PASSIONS, LOVEJOY!!!!  Second of all, This is a really great first post. I hope to read more! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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